[O Level] Karangan Pelajar: Kamu telah tersilap langkah dalam membuat keputusan yang penting. Gambarkan peristiwa itu dan pengajaran yang dapat kamu perolehi melalui peristiwa tersebut.

Zulfadhli (pic)

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This karangan was written by Zulfadhli who has graciously agreed to share with all.

This excellent piece is a good attempt at the descriptive writing strategy we taught in class. I like this karangan in particular because there is a good traction between its content and the question expectation. Furthermore, I applaud Zulfadhli for attempting a matured theme that is not easy to write about (for his age).

For your reading pleasure. Enjoy!